The Commercial
By Kbmontrose
kbmontrose@yahoo.com
Copyright 2015 by Kbmontrose, all rights reserved
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This story is intended for ADULTS ONLY. It contains explicit depictions
of sexual activity
involving minors. If you are not of a legal age in your locality to
view such material or
if such material does not appeal to you, do not read further, and do
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story.
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This is a revised version of a story originally posted at
The attached story I originally posted at: http://disc.yourwebapps.com/discussion.cgi?disc=240409;article=1723;title=Stripping%20and%20Humiliation
The
Commercial (Revised)
“This
would give us the authentic look we really want.” Ms. Pierce, the director,
said. “Most everything else we need the
kids can do very well. This scene,
however, requires the perfect look and I think it’ll only occur if what happens
is completely real and unknown to Cody.”
Martha
looked at Ms. Pierce shocked to hear what she was asking.
“I
don’t know. His parents might not like
the idea.” Martha said with a look of concern on her face.
“Oh,
c’mon,” her sister Ellen replied playfully nudging Martha, “it’ll be funny and
besides, Carol will love it. Even Frank
will get a kick out of it.”
Cody
had been doing commercials from a very young age. His parents, Carol and Frank, were away with
Cody’s two sisters and had left him with his aunt Martha and uncle George. They had helped him with his commercials
before so Cody’s parents had no problem leaving his aunt and uncle in charge of
him for this one. With uncle George at
work today, Cody’s aunt Ellen had come with him and his aunt Martha to the
filming.
Martha
managed a slight grin even though concern about her nephew still maintained
dominance. She couldn’t deny, however,
that what Ms. Pierce wanted to have happen would be the most likely way to
produce a genuine reaction.
“Still,
I’m texting Carol and Frank just to be sure.” she said to placate herself.
Ellen
sighed but accepted her sister’s reluctance to make this decision on her own
even though she’d been given full permission to act on Cody’s behalf.
While
waiting on a reply, Martha expressed some further concern to Ms. Pierce.
“You’re
very sure about what will and will not be seen in the commercial?”
“Very
sure.” was the director’s reply.
“I
don’t know. I still don’t think his
parents will like the idea.” Martha looked over at her nephew as he played with
the other kids who were to be in the commercial. Of course, she certainly knew Cody wouldn’t
like the idea. But, as Ms. Pierce kept
insisting, his not knowing was crucial to the perfect look.
Martha
kept watching the kids especially Cody.
She had to grin as she noticed the girls who were to also be in the
commercial stole glances at her cute 12-year-old nephew more so than they did
at any of the other boys. Martha had no
doubts as to why they paid him so much attention. Cody had blond hair trimmed quite short, was
lean and wiry and just a bit taller than average for his age. And, unknown just yet to the shy lad, he was
the cutest boy in his 7th grade class according to his female
classmates’ thoughts and their slumber party comments about him.
“Oh,
c’mon!” Ellen replied getting impatient at waiting for a reply from Cody’s
parents.
But
before Ellen could continue trying to convince her sister to throw caution to
the wind, Martha’s phone buzzed.
Martha’s eyes opened in surprise as she read the text from Cody’s
parents that indicated their permission for what the director wanted. They added not only how perfect and funny
they, too, thought this would be but maybe it would take a bit of the arrogance
out of him he’d been displaying lately.
Ellen
actually let out a squeal of delight sounding like a little school girl
giggling in her gladness at the message.
Martha scowled at Ellen’s reaction but dutifully reported the result to
Ms. Pierce. The director gave a grin
that made Martha just a bit uneasy.
Martha and Ellen watched as Ms. Pierce turned and approached the
children to start getting them ready for the commercial.
After
several practices, Ms. Pierce decided it was time to do some actual takes. The children all acted their parts very well
including Cody.
“One
more take in a few moments.” Ms. Pierce announced to the children. Then she went to confer with her crew to set
up the final touches. Cody’s two aunts
listened in. Martha surprised herself as
she had to squelch her own giggles along with Ellen and some of the crew. Even though they all knew what they were to
do some of the crew’s professionalism left them briefly in anticipation of this
last take. With the same grin that had
previously worried Martha, Ms. Pierce headed back to the children.
After
a short period of time getting all the other kids in place again, Ms. Pierce
approached Cody.
“Okay,
Cody, are you ready?” she asked him.
Cody
shook his head yes.
“Alright,
as soon as I give the signal, take off running and you know what to do then,
right?”
Again,
Cody indicated in the affirmative.
“Now
this take needs to be perfect, okay?” It
was more of a command than a question.
Ms. Pierce walked away to her position with her wicked little grin
taking up seemingly permanent residence on her face.
At
Ms. Pierce’s cue, Cody and all the other kids in the commercial began playing
around as they had been instructed to do.
Cody got into place excited that he was chosen to do the final part of
this tv ad.
Moments
before he was to do his run and dive on the water slide he heard Ms. Pierce
shout “Cut!”.
He
looked around to see why and noticed a few of the make-up people approaching
him. Ms. Pierce assured him and the
other kids nothing was wrong. All this
time the make-up people were making a fuss over him. Though Cody was used to having make-up put on
from his previous commercial roles, he could not figure out why he had to for
this commercial and at this moment. What
his aunts and some others saw that Cody didn’t was what a few of the special
effects people were doing to him that the make-up people were keeping his
attention away from.
Finally,
Ms. Pierce seemed satisfied. Having the
kids get into position for Cody to do this last part, she gave the signal and
Cody took off running and diving onto the back yard waterslide which is what
was being advertised.
Cody
knew when he arrived at the end of the slide he was to wear a look of
embarrassment as though he’d lost his swim trunks. The script called for a stop in the action so
a crew member could place at the appropriate place on the water slide a pair of
swim trunks identical to the ones Cody was wearing to make it look like they’d
come off. Then the camera would switch
from Cody’s shocked face to the vacant matching swim trunks to complete the
effect.
Cody
was actually laughing as he zoomed along the slide, not just because he was
supposed to for the commercial, but this was really fun. He wondered if he’d be able to adequately
fake a look of utter embarrassment. He
needn’t have worried.
The
slide had been slicked up a bit to be sure Cody would make it to the end. Halfway to the end, Cody felt a tug that
changed the look on his face instantly.
Cody’s
swim trunks had been yanked off and he kept on sliding butt-naked toward the
end of the slide. He heard the
collective gasp of all the other kids who had also been uninformed of this part
as Ms. Pierce wanted a genuine response from them as well. A very brief silence followed the kids’
initial shock at Cody’s trunks being pulled off of him. By the time he came to a stop, the laughter was
near deafening, his bare butt was on grand display, and he had the perfect look
of total embarrassment that the grinning Ms. Pierce wanted.
A
Few Weeks Later
A
none-too-happy Cody sat on the couch with his parents, aunt Ellen. His aunt Martha, uncle George, and two
sisters were seated in various other places around the tv. Though normally excited about watching the
debut of one of the commercials he acted in, Cody had no desire to watch this
one. His face was already slightly red
knowing what his parents, two aunts, and his uncle knew. At least, he thought to himself, his two
sisters didn’t know and would never know if he could help it.
“Just
be sure your swim trunks are tied up tight!” the voiceover said at the end of
the commercial.
As
these words were being spoken, the camera switched from a very embarrassed,
red-faced, shocked looking Cody back to a place halfway down the backyard
waterslide where a pair of swim trunks were laying giving the implication that
they were the ones that used to be on the embarrassed boy. The commercial ended with a shot of the other
kids pointing and laughing with the name of the backyard waterslide eventually
taking over.
Cody
blushed a remarkable red and tried to sink down into the couch. Everyone but Cody was laughing with all but
his sisters wearing knowing smiles.
“How
did you get such a great embarrassed look, twirp?” his older sister Liz asked
impressed with her brother’s acting and loving his red face on the
commercial. She noted that his face
seemed to have a similar glow now as well.
“Let
me tell you…” Cody’s aunt Ellen started but got interrupted.
“Please,
no,” Cody protested trying to preserve at least a modicum of dignity. However, his parents hushed him and let aunt
Ellen continue.
Even
before aunt Ellen finished her tale, most everyone, except Cody of course, was
in hysterics. Several were clutching
stitches in their sides.
“You
were actually naked?” Cody’s younger sister Tiffany choked out between howls of
laughter. “That would’ve been funny to
see!”
Cody
could only hang his head lower in embarrassment. Along with some conciliation that none of his
nudity was allowed to be shown in the commercial, he was glad that aunt Ellen
had left out of her account some of what else had happened. He shuddered just thinking about it. But just as he thought that was the end of
his humiliation in front of his family his aunt Ellen spoke up again.
“Okay,
everyone, let’s take a look at this.”
Everyone
looked up at aunt Ellen who’d positioned herself next to the tv. Though all but Cody still sported amused
looks on their faces, everyone wondered what aunt Ellen was up to.
“I
got this from one of the video people.” she said with a grin as she slipped the
disc into the player.
Though
no one still knew for sure what aunt Ellen was doing, they had their
theories. And though the theories were
essentially the same, Cody’s expression did not match the amused and excited
ones of his family.
Ellen
pushed play and announced “Get ready for the special director’s cut.” followed
by a snort. She gave a quick wink to
Tiffany indicating she may get her wish.
“No, no, no, no, no!” Cody
shouted in his mind.
Cody
cringed as he watched himself on the screen. He saw one of the make-up people
deftly untie his drawstring without him noticing. He saw his swim trunks getting yanked off by
the nearly undetectable lines the special effects people had fastened to his
trunks while his attention had been taken by the make-up people. He watched as he blasted butt naked out of
his trunks sliding to the end of the slide in only his birthday suit.
Cody
started to plead for them to stop showing this but his parents told him how
adorable he looked and he should be proud of his cute naked body. In only a half-joking tone, his mother
suggested he ought to be naked all the time.
Cody’s shocked look greatly amused his mother.
“Now
be quiet and let us enjoy the rest of the show.” his mother commanded him only
partly holding back her chuckles.
Cody
sighed and turned back to see himself make the stupid mistake of standing
up. He watched as his commercial self
looked down in horror to see his genitals on grand display. He saw himself turn in search of his wayward
trunks only to switch from exhibiting his bare butt to the other kids to
exposing his genitals to them. He saw
the look of mortification on his own face increase along with the redness of
his cheeks.
Cody’s
sisters nearly wet themselves laughing as they saw their on-screen naked
embarrassed brother drop his jaw in realization that he was unwillingly giving
all these kids a free show. They turned to look at him and saw the exact
same expression on his face now as he had on this version of the
commercial. The two girls exploded with
a renewed vigor in their laughter upon noticing this similarity.
All
during this, Cody wanted so badly to grab the disc out of the player and dash
out of the room. But his humiliation
seemed to paralyze him so he sat there shaking his head back-and-forth in
disbelief at what he and everyone else were seeing.
Upon
the completion of this extended version of the commercial, Cody overcame his
paralysis and skedaddled from the room.
His parents eventually followed him upstairs to his room to try and
console him but they had little luck with this.
A
while later, Cody heard some yelling and shouting outside. He looked out his window to see his sisters
playing on the backyard waterslide he’d been given as part of his remuneration
for doing the commercial. His face started
to get a bit red again not only from embarrassment but with a bit of anger that
they would be playing on it which, of course, reminded him of his horrible
naked ordeal. However, he couldn’t help but see how much fun it looked, put on
his swim trunks, and headed out to join them.
He did make many checks of his drawstring.
(The End)